All Comments on 'Angel Vengadora'

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Yesok1Yesok13 months ago

So enjoy your short stories.

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EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@Yesok1 - thank you so much 😊 Emily

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@Boyd Percy - thank you 😊 Emily

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale3 months ago

Fun! But you describe her trepidation early in the story. Would such a being have felt fear in that situation?

JBEdwardsJBEdwards3 months ago

A story with a moral: Don't mess with angels. Words to live by. ~~JB

lc69hunterlc69hunter3 months ago

Ha! Loved it Assholes got what they deserved

MigbirdMigbird3 months ago

Wow — some anger there. Loved the wings and immediately thought of a succubus rendering — can easily imagine her fun. Would also be interesting to see how our “angel” deals with her DG sisters, but this is a short 750 piece from an intriguing imagination.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@Rob_Royale - I tried to make it consistent with her play acting for Bobb’y video. If I missed something please tell me 😊 Emily

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@JBEdwards - thank you 😊 Emily

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@lc69hunter - thank you 😊 Emily

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@Migbird - thank you. Elena had some shit happen to her in Heaven & Hole - which led directly to this story. I plan some more Elena and Bobby stories as part of my Angels & Demons universe. Emily

Djmac1031Djmac10313 months ago

I would definitely be interested in reading some longer Elena adventures. Good stuff. It's been so much fun expanding on this shared universe. Makes me wanna get back to writing my next one.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@Djmac1031 - yeah, I agree 😊 Emily

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking3 months ago

Would have preferred more foreshadowing of the eventual twist, but a fun read nonetheless.

DevinterDevinter3 months ago

Purity pledge girlfriends sending their boyfriend elsewhere to satisfy their urges is strangely dark on multiple levels at once. How inspiring!

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@joy_of_cooking - I think I crammed all I could in 750 words 😊 Emily

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@Devinter - intentionally dark 😊 Emily

AmberSolisAmberSolis3 months ago

Lovely story! If only there were more girls like her, out there.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@AmberSolis - thank you. Elena will have some more adventures. She became like this after demonstrating extreme self-sacrifice to help another woman in Heaven & Hole. Emily

inka2222inka22223 months ago

Not enough revenge on assholes by my preference, but 5 stars for well written and original read.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller3 months agoAuthor

@inka2222 - avenging angels kill less aasholes than vengeance demons 😊 Emily

dmallorddmallord2 months ago

Absolutely priceless. 5*

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller14 days agoAuthor

@dmallord - sorry, had missed this - Emily

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