All Comments on 'Anita's Birthday Ch. 01'

by Theedgeofoz

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JusttooldJusttooldover 11 years ago
good

Good build up. Your style of writing is something new to me and I like it. When is the next chapter comeing.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Neat format

I like the idea...this format allows you to be as unrealistic as Sweetie's imagination, and Sweetie is a Very Horny and Imaginative Babe!

ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
Rather brief

Although you managed to squeeze in mutual oral with her online lover, they don't get any further before the story suddenly ends. Are you planning a follow-up?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Question

Does he get 50 nights with different women?

(Sorry how stupid of me that would be cheating)

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Bukkake

Bukkake party. Wow, what a wonderful way to show your wife how much you love her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
@26thNC

Leaving several comments within minutes of each other seems to be a habit of yours. You skim stories looking for content you object to and leave snarky comments; as if your opinion matters. You're a typical misogynistic troll. Nothing more.

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