All Comments on 'Annabelle's Journey Pt. 02'

Another great chapter. You are one of the better writers of the genre. This chapter continues to develop the characters at the same time as leaving the possibility of a number of directions for the plot. Looking forward very much to the next chapter with Annabelle and Jen continuing down the dark path. Well done.

Thanks bcc. Love hearing your feedback. Yes, more to come. Annabelle needs to be careful. Nothing in her past life has prepared her for this …

excellent part 12. looking forward to part 3....

More please.

So much potential for going deeper. Thank you.

Annabelle's only way is down.

Have re-read Annabelle’s adventures so far and find the quality of the writing first rate. Annabelle’s adventures have a way to go yet with Terri guiding her along the path. I hope she experiences much more; there are some interesting indicators in the story of where she might end up. Anticipating a great chapter 3 and hopefully 4 and 5?

Hope the next chapters are as good.

Jo. I hope you haven’t given up these great stories. They gave much pleasure. There’s so much potential with all the various characters past and present. Chantal and Marie and others,

Hi bcc - thank for your ongoing feedback. It really means a lot to me. I’m working on a story about a young guy who is discovering his female side … and his increasingly dangerous journey of self realisation.

Part 3 of Annabelle’s Journey just needs writing. Lots of potential!

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