All Comments on 'Anna's Education - Ch. 01'

After some confusion when the opening couple of paragraphs moved from the third person narrative to the first, I really enjoyed this opening chapter. You've hit on a winning formula, here, Aoife, my dear. I love the way you hint at Anna's repressed (?) lesbian leanings, and to put her in a situation where she's potentially going to be manipulated by two experienced lesbians is a thrilling prospect. A great start to what I'm sure is going to be another very stimulating Aoife saga. Roll on chapter 2! This one gets five stars, naturally.

A good precursor to more.

Great start!

She certainly needs some control and structure in her life.

She does not need Nathan.

A little hypnotism and a sore bottom would certainly help.

Liz is just the right person to sort her out