All Comments on 'Annie takes over Pt. 02'

by Lonewo1975

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PappasleazePappasleaze4 months ago

First part was okay but the second part went down hill and the ending just did not do it any justice. 3 stars for the plot and for the good Annie characterization.

FailedscoutFailedscout4 months ago

I was really enjoying this story up until the last two paragraphs.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

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