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Click hereLila and I laughed, and in reply, I said, "Okay, we'll get dinner ready."
We left them in the foyer and got busy in the kitchen. Pretty soon, Luke and Attie joined us and Attie went to Lila and the two embraced each other and cried. When they separated, Lila excused herself to go to the powder room and Attie went to the pantry and came out with a couple aprons.
Luke and I went to the outside grill to put on the kabobs I'd prepared with cubes of tenderloin, red and green bells, sweet onions, mushrooms and pineapple. Tonight, would be good eats.
From the kitchen, Lila asked through the open door, "Is it warm enough to eat outside?"
"Absolutely," I answered back, and the girls immediately started disassembling the dinner table settings (that I had painstakingly set up to be just right) and bringing them to the outside table.
Luke and I went in to start bringing the food out and putting it on the outside burners and in the oven. When we walked out with our first pots, the girls were at the table putting the place settings in order, their naked backsides exposed in their aprons-only outfits.
Dinner was great, but didn't compare to the after-dinner entertainment...
After making love to exhaustion, Lila and I passed out; only to be awakened by her cellphone at 4 a.m. It was Attie. She sounded choked up. We both sat up as Lila put her on speaker.
"Attie, what's wrong?" Lila asked.
Attie nearly shouted, "What have you done to my husband?"
Then she laughed, "My pussy, my pussy is trashed. The damn beast has worn my ass out...and licked it raw!
Sis, thank you for my new Boy-Toy!"
THE END
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ANYTHING FOR FAMILY
You did warn me, well written and constructed but not my cup of tea I had hoped for a slightly different end.
Nonsense.
It's just not believeable or even relatable.
They are FAMILY and have a lifetime of uncomfortable interaction ahead of them. "Oh remember when I taught your husband how to eat pussy and fuck 7 or 8 years ago? Then you fucked my husband's brains out? And pass the potatoes."
It's just wierd. And they come to the conclusion awfully fast that the only way to help Luke is for the sister in law to go fuck him. Fast as in...one or two conversations and a few days on vacation.
"Gee honey. I've been really wracking my brain and going over this issue that Luke has for at least 2 hours now. And I think the only way forward I can figure...is for me to fuck his monster cock and fix him for my sister. I don't think there is anything else we can do, but I love my sister enough to make this sacrifice for her. As a consolation you get to fuck her too. Since she's hot we'll both get a little jealous but since we're family we gotta make sacrifices. Now...let's get to swapping."
Nonsense.
Decent writing. But yeah...just doesn't work for me.
Nonsense.
It's just not believeable or even relatable.
Decent writing. But yeah...just doesn't work for me.
Just too nonsensical. In real life, Luke and Attie should have/would have gone to a therapist when Attie had arrived at the “this has to be fixed or I’m done” point. But OK…instead they decided to let her sister and husband…who she has a huge crush on by the way….try to help.
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So at the point that Ian and Lila understand that the “problem” is that Luke has some serious sexual hangups/aversions…..the next step was to get Luke to a PROFESSIONAL therapist ASAP. But then there goes the excuse for some swinging sex 😎
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As with so many LW stories, plots often hinge on illogical behavior by the characters. Sometimes it works…many times it just doesn’t. In this case….the plot hole was just too damn big.
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