All Comments on 'Anything for Love Ch. 01'

by gbdfa2

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oneagainstoneagainst7 months ago

It's been great working with you on the Lost and Found story event, working Bethany and Rose and the crew into the background of the other stories. Fantastic, strong first story!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Just love a good old fashioned sub showdown, great work

gbdfa2gbdfa27 months agoAuthor

I appreciate the effort to add them in; the encouragement, editing, and constructive feedback for this and future chapter(s). It's a challenge, but rewarding.

flynn99flynn997 months ago

Lost and found at the OK corral! Good first story, gbdfa

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

boring in total very poor

DustofFallenStarsDustofFallenStars6 months ago

Wonderfully playful, the spectacle of hidden wristbands and keys seemed a novel and inventive inclusion in the scene.

I hope that this is not the last we hear of Bethany's (and Hannah's) evening, or even Leah's.

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