All Comments on 'Are We Even Now? Pt. 06'

WHATVA TOTAL WASTE OF TIME... Why would anybody want to make a sequel to one of the stories from BLBONES? Although he has in a written in many years that particular author always features A wife who goes through an extreme overreaction or doesn't even recognize her husband as a human being that has value or feelings

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I cannot for the life me figure out why somebody like George Anderson would go out of his way to make a sequel to this horrible original story.

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The only thing I can think of is that George Anderson stories often feature strong tendency where a loving wife can commit the most shatteringly incredible stunning horrific acts in the marriage and then still expects the stay married

But if it took years for her to get her head out of her ass, then Tad and Burt dodged a bullet. I mean, talk about self-absorbed. At no point did she even appear to have any feelings beyond being angry.

She sounds like a sociopath.

He's still a wimp for not beating his supposed to be best friend

I know that I'm biased, but I think it's a great story. I've read it quite a few times and will keep doing so. Well done, George.

Now that story is full of verisimilitude. -SS77

Excellent story, George. I love the intensity of your stories with their so believable and flawed characters, but most of all, it's the pacing, the way you tell the story. Thank-you for this superlative effort!!!

Well George, your writing is always a 5* rating even though I have to rank your characters and conclusions significantly lower most of the time.

This one is pretty damn good though and I thought you illustrated a deranged woman well.

The original story was over the top and didn't really represent how humans would react to such blatant abuse and betrayal and you missed on only one major point in your version.

Tad would have absolutely beaten Burt into hamburger.

Burt was also no friend because no friend would even consider doing what he did unless he had a death wish.

Overall I think this was a good continuation of a ridiculously over the top story.

Thank you.

I liked it. 3*

I hated the original story, thought it a real piece of shit, Gave it 1/5. If I could’ve given it less I would’ve.

Your attempt failed as well, it was just as terrible as the other endings. You are a good author with quite a few classics under your belt. I like most of your stories.

But this one is a dud, a real stinker.

Scores 1/5

Thank you for the provocative story, Mr. Anderson. Perfect. Randi.

Writing excellent... plot so so... characters not nice at all. Still worth 5

Unlike the "February" story, the character development is superb.

I never expected anything from GA that didn't have a wimpy husband taking back the horrible bitch of a wife. This was a total shock.

I liked the story and I like how she learned her lessen. Even after what she did to Tad had she not gone all slut working at he club and doing one night stands she had a very good chance of finding someone and ending up like Tad and Bert.

And as usual I always laugh at the so called best friend who does his buddies wife and think that they all will remain friends.

Even the worse bitches and bastards among us find remorse eventually. Nice follow-up to the original story.

Unbelievable! You managed to make a sound end out of loony trash. I only wonder why have you chosen a disgusting abominable downer to conclude with something readable.

From Russia with respect!

A poignant story.

This was an insightful, well-written and interesting story.

It is a sad comment, but the wife's over-the-top response based on assumptions may not be all that unusual.

People should act, particularly do crazy things, only with all the information, which the wife is now suffering because she failed to do in this case.

It's telling, isn't it, that you'd choose an insipid cuckold story to expand upon. No surprise there, it's your kind of story. You obviously love stories where the woman cheats on her husband, in the most egregiously cruel manner possible, and then rub his nose in it, over and over. I still think you're a woman pretending to be a male author, and you must really hate your ex-husband(s). LOL

How many mentally-well-balanced men would have ever even read the original? You can tell what kind of story it is without wading through it. And I'm betting you've read it more than once. Hell, for all we know, you're the original author.

2 stars

I was unfamiliar with the original story, so i read part 1 before reading your part 6. I then read parts 2-5. The original part 1 was over the top but entertaining, but the originall four sequels were terrible . Your sequel was, as usual, well written, and. I felt, realistic and appropriate. I first agreed with some off the comments that felt Tad should have bear up Brad, but on reflection, felt his cutting ties was a smarter move.

I really liked your sequel. Easily 5 stars.

I had serious problems with the ALL the ways that the previous story ended. As is made perfectly clear in this version, no wife whom truly loved her husband could have done what she did.

...the smell of the crowd. Blast from the past that Newley / Bricusse reference, thanks for that. Thank you also for a very well written tale.

It is difficult to polish a turd, but you gave it your best effort. 4/5

She stripped for years and it never got back to her real job. Highly unlikely.

Good story!

5

Another terrific start from a GA story. Unfortunately, it seemed to lose steam after the initial confrontation which also seems to be part in parcel of a GA story. When she found Tad after Burt's wedding I thought this might be interesting, but nothing happened.

Still gave the effort four stars. Great writing, super readability, but the storyline seem to leave too much on the table.

With you I could learn to

With you what a new day

But who can I turn to

If you turn away?

Performance credit: Anthony Newley (YT). Lovely story. Perfect song. Life has a soundtrack. I can imagine her humming this song to herself as she wonders whether the new hire widower in accounting with the two kids might ask her out. And letting that sad wisdom save her.

Before we knew the context you could almost sympathize with Sandy , that her husband has cheated on her with 2 women and she was angry and wanted.ro make sure he wouldn't cheat. Yet it unravels, you see that age too easily was looking at Burr and she was so narcissistic in her revenge she never once thought to let him explain what happened and to apologize. She is a narcissist if the worst kind, and her ugliness unrolls in front of us. Her thing with Burt was not revenge, it was her excuse to cheat q a guy she found hot..not even.ginna mention the club. Crap.

Burt seems like a decent guy, but he isn't, he git his rocks off at the expense of Tad then wonders why he is pissed? Then have weekend with her,instead of reading her the riot act...hell they could have locked themselves in the bedroom and pretended to have sex to punish him, rotten as that was, but what he did showed what he was,a scumball who did want Sandy,then pretended to be sorry.

Thanks for using the characters from the original and having them act in a believable way.

Wow ❗

Well, relatively intelligent characters.... Poorly made decisions... Real consequences.

Plot works well.

And it's short... for a GeorgeAnderson story.

Earned all 5*s 😀👏👏.

Thank you

Back to the forest, fellows........

Haven't read the original story, but since that formula's been used a few times already, it's not too hard to jump in the saddle. Not sure in what proportion the blame was spread initially between the two parties, but in this followup, Sandy definitely eats most of it for her scorched earth retaliation. Makes her fate more palatable. Was a pretty good standalone IMO.

Went back and read the original, horrible story. But this sequel was really good and you made the unbelievable characters of the original more real. I especially liked that you let Sandy continue on here deranged path for a couple of years before realizing what she had done. To often in LW there is a wife who willingly commits the most horrible of betrayals one day and the next profess her eternal love and submission to her husband, thats crazy. Like that weird story with the couple and the football player... ;)

The woman was delusional. She was right when she said she went off the rails. She kept saying she loved Tad but kept running bs into fuck. Burt when Tad didn’t buy her shit. Then the light came on in Burt’s brain. If she’ll do it to Tad, she’ll do it to me. Of course Tad should have dumped her skanky ass when she stripped in the Club..Of course this story theme is the same as many others in the LW genre but I still like to read them. Hard to create a new story in LW when so many themes and takes on the subject have been used over and over. Keep writing GA. BTW I thought about writing my take on your February Sucks but couldn’t get a word in edgewise. 😆 seems everybody had something to say about your story.

If your spouse gets drunk and wrecks the car, is it the intelligent response for the other spouse to get drunk and wreck the other car? An undiscussed purchase of a $1000 dress is answered by the purchase of a set of golf clubs? Of course those are silly analogies, because it is the behavior of silly immature people. And for me it is boring and obnoxious to read about the romantic conflicts between adolescents. All they really understand about life and themselves is how to fuck, so that is the only thing they do well.

Thanks for the effort, but it is still a pigs ear.

This was the best ending to the story. How anyone could think that prostituting yourself on stage with her husband's friend was in any way proportionate or acceptable is delusional. Everyone now knows she is a disgusting person who no one in their right mind would want a relationship with. Her husband made a mistake only known to very few people but she totally humiliated him. 5 stars

And the winner is - Door #6. I did not enjoy the original story or any of the follow-up chapters by BIBones. None of the characters in the original story were likable. I’m glad I went against my first instinct to pass on this. Nice job of giving this sad tale a proper send off.

"I remember what you said that if he dropped me over this, he wasn't a friend worth having." - He's "not a friend worth having" because he drops his "friend" for fucking his wife?! BURT wasn't the friend worth having.

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"All I'd done was get even for his cheating" - She did FAR more than "get even." She had public sex, right in front of him, with his "best friend!"

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"it just said I'd seen what you did to him; what made me think you wouldn't do the same thing to me?" - Maybe she would, IF you cheated on her! But the main thing is that her revenge was way out of line with his offense.

For writing this kudos. Fuck you for inducing me to read as much of Part 1 as I could stomach. 😂

Seems like Burt and Ernie, I mean Tad, both dodged a bullet. 👍

I went back and read all the original endings and found them all disgusting. Yours is very well written, as expected from GA, but paints Sandy as no less disgusting. She was delusional to think Tad would tolerate her public actions at the club, and then the night with his best friend. Her marriage was done even before the weekend with the false friend Bert. Good old Bert talks of being Tad's best friend, but happily stabs him in the back again and again. I'm glad you gave Tad his happy life, and let Bert finally realize Sandy's true nature before finding his undeserved bright future. Sandy, the angry, stripper and admitted whore is left alone, knowing that she was responsible for burning any chance she had for happiness. Your depiction of Sandy was so good that I actually disliked her even more than I did when reading the original.

As another responder stated, she was delusional. One, male or female, doesn't treat their spouse like the MC (female) did and expect he/she to remain in LOVE! Her actions were vile, vindictive, and WAY over the top in getting even. The MC (male) didn't flaunt the affair, didn't rub the actions, stripping, letting men play with her body, or fucking their best friend (although I'd hope a BEST FRIEND wouldn't do that to me!). I gave this a *1 for the actions displayed in the story, not for the writing - it was well written! Just didn't like the portrayal of the female MC!

Very good! The woman needs help. Even after admitting to herself that she acted terribly, she still rationalized that she did nothing wrong. She’s only sorry that her actions hurt him beyond her ability to understand. She didn’t acknowledge that the cruelty of her actions could, at some point, provoke a physical attack.

A loon. She keeps harping about Tad disrespecting her by his trysts. However she throws away any respect for herself by putting on a sex show for her hubby and patrons of a club frequented by them regularly. She never had any self respect.

You gave the old GeorgeAnderson treatment to a rather over the top setup. I think you nailed the wife's personality. Tad really slammed Burt with the note about what a crazy bitch might do to him too. Her return to The Club was logical.

And of course the writing was well done. As I said. The most logical outcome, although Burt's and Tad's marriages were a little storybook.

That bitch cannot be happy in this story and hope she died of an old age with house full of cats

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By far the best of the “completions” of this story, and the most believable. Thanks.

Once again a well written story

But why should we care? None of the main characters could be classified as good people. Vengeful, petty people that couldn't hold a meaningful conversation. Had they all ended up alone nobody would have been surprised. Maybe next time something original?

Sandy!s weekend with Burt was a stupid act. An appropriate end to a sad story. Good work.

On eof the better endings of the original story. Even though that this version is the only one where Ted cheated just once. In any case, humiliating the husband in a public way with having sex with his best friend in front of a bunch of strangers and maybe even not so strangers only works with a willing cuckold husband.

She Sounds Properly Misserable. She does'nt talk it over and get his side. then takes his friend into their room and thinks that's over. but wait you're not here on friday so I will go with option #1

I really didn’t like this one & I can’t figure out why.

I find no fault with the story flow nor the language, but it was not satisfying to me.

I think it was just the tremendous amount of stupidity on her part.

How in the world could she keep on making such stupid decisions?

3 stars.

Bill

Some people just can't react to situations in a sensible, proportionate way.

This is a a 5* telling of this kind of story.

Lots of left on the shelf people out there , a few of the women in our circle call them the desperados. Remember two out other marriages fail so some people are like a conveyer belt they will come round again.

Anger management sessions for both of them. Sandy needs to get her "fragile female ego" under control. Maybe there will besomeone for her if she can.

I don/'t like cheaters period! Be it male or female. When she founded out he cheated, she have a plan to protect he\r assets then toss his ass to the curb . She cheated and shoved it in his face demoralizing him to the N degree. Two wrongs do not make it right. I would like both parties to suffer. I want her to suffer more than Al because she went overboard. Regarding his friend, I think he should not live life well. I wish those two got merry with a rocky base and divorce in 2 years.

When you go from pain to revenge there is seldom anything useful left in the wake of disaster. This was a better ending to the original story but still nothing to learn from for others. Well, perhaps that it is better to be like Sergeant Joe Friday and get just the facts ma'am.

I enjoyed your ending better. Seemed so much more realistic... thought out. You always have to get all the facts... no matter how hard it is... before you act. She finally learned that in the end... so sad. Thank-you

So nice, a simple hot,hot , slow burning fire. Burn deary burn.

Clearly Tad dodged a bullet.. Probably shouldn’t have warned off Burt till after they married.

Well written? Yes. But as another didn't like this any better in fact less. If once and drunk And really remorseful possible reconciliation. When revenge is over the top. END.

Much much better ending than the originals.

Die alone you malicious cunt.

Anthony Newly lyrics...seriously? In other news, this was my second read of this. Seeing how bad the original story and endings were I'm still amazed anyone would dare try to make chicken salad out of it. Mission accomplished George. Nice job.

A typical story about a narcissistic woman , who has been patiently waiting for any excuse to begin being the slutty bitch that she always dreamed of being...

A well written morality tale of the dangers of revenge.

LA

This was the best of the "endings" , i was waiting for Tad to take some revenge of Burt , some attitude adjustment with a baseball bat maybe?

Just another great GA story…wonderful writing, with morality woven in. Five stars ⭐️ for this one!

she still wasn't sorry.

she still didn't care about her husband

2starrs

I’m shocked by the comments he cheated first is everyone missing that he betrayed an hurt her beyond anything else he put someone else first before his wife an then she retaliates after being faithful their whole relationship an she’s in the wrong WOW I’m super amazed how hypocritical people can be. Personally I have morals so if I get cheated on ure gone simple after 18 years it would be hard but if he put someone ahead of me then he doesn’t love me enough so should be happy with his other women an I ain’t fighting for someone who doesn’t want me

She deserved what she got for her overreaction. However, Burt deserved some payback which was lacking here.

I loved how the outcome wasn’t clear until the end. What a train wreck. Excellent twist of a happily ever after

I love to hate most all of your characters and hate when the loved ones are wronged. But I always enjoy your writing. Thanks for sharing.

She got what she deserved! She wallowed in her revenge and followed it up with a self-indulgent second weekend. Her eyes only opened when the specter of a lonely old age was before her. Throughout it was all about her. Well, she can now only hope! 3*s.

Alcohol clouds the mind, it makes you do things you wouldn’t normally do, especially with encouragement from others. Sandy made a sober and emotional harsh decision/choice, it obviously was the wrong one. When someone messes up, give them the opportunity to explain, ask your questions, get all the details and information you can. Revenge is never the answer to save a marriage. Tad should have to experience some consequences for his actions. Sandy over reacted and went way to far. Ruined the friendship of two best friends, ruined her marriage (that could have been saved) and ended up a very lonely and despicable person. Tad shares fault, on a scale of one to ten, his was a three and hers was a 10+. A great story, very well written and a lesson for all married couples.

Les

With a loving wife and friend like that .. He doesn't need any enemies .. Sadly I had a friend like that he cheated with the girl I liked after I gave her a promissory ring . I never got the ring back either .He then joined the Marines and became a DI . He put in 20 plus years .

I have way too much compassion an end up feeling sorry for the cheating wife which I know is wrong but without his cheating hers wouldn’t of happened. is he supposed to get away with no consequences. Why should a cheating husband get his happy ever after but the cheating wife doesn’t. I think I’d mentally set out to throw a spanner in the works of his new happy family whether I’d follow through I’m unsure but planted seeds definitely have a way of growing, wonder if his new wife knows he’s a cheat

I only discovered you recently after reading several alternative endings to February Sucks. I like your stories much more than do many of your other readers because I sense real human depth to your characters -- so thank you.

@anonymous

"I have way too much compassion an end up feeling sorry for the cheating wife"

You realize that if she'd simply divorced Tad, Bob would've married her? But she set out to deliberately rip his heart from his chest, grind it into the dirt, then hand it back to him. So Bob didn't want her either. Tad fucked up. He deserved divorce, if she wanted it. He deserved the guilt. But she didn't divorce him, she set-out with the intention of causing him pain. He betrayed her while he was drunk, without intending to cause her pain, felt horrible about it, and never sought to do it again. She betrayed him while sober, deliberately seeking to hurt him, and made a production out of twisting the knife.

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She made her lonely bed with her vicious, sociopathic cruelty.

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Again: divorce Tad for his infidelity? He's crushed, she marries Bob, and maybe Tad eventually finds someone, who knows.

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Turn into a cruel sociopath who delights in Tad's suffering? Tad escapes, no longer riddled with guilt, Bob is repelled, and she ends up alone.

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It's not complicated. And it's not unfair. It's predictable.

The woman in this story reminds me of the fact that the most callous, vindictive, selfish and unforgiving people in my life have been women I knew growing up. They were all poor growing up in Cambridge MA in the 50's. My uncle used to call it Moscow on the Charles. A liberal cesspool. Most of them ended up alone in their 40's because they never appreciated their husband's hard work to provide them with a better life. They could never think about or care about anybody but themselves.

If I were her,I would have gone up to his new wife,introduced my self has is ex wife and told her to watch out for his cheating because that is why they were divorced.

Must be the end of days because Anderson wrote something that didn't make the husband out to be a pathetic wimp. Seen this hypothesis in a couple of other works. And the outcome would be the same. If the wife would have just went out and discreetly fucked someone else and left it at that, case closed. But when you try to one up in this, we'll play stupid games, win stupid prizes...

she got what she deserved. many of the critics rationalize her behavior. i think the provider of the incriminating pics had an agenda.

Great, and the Anthony Newley song is an all time favourite of mine

I am not sure any human would think it was over the top. Getting even is always a slippery slope be it business, love, or anything else in life. I know it was a continuation and the plot was set in motion. I just wonder if there is forgiveness or true remorse before ten years. The first weekend shows she did not really care she was angry and let it rule her emotions and tried to claim the high ground when in reality she was worse than he ever was.

Well written.

Ships hit the rocks for a variety of reasons, all you can do is hope for the best and try to make things go better next time. I've been thru this kind of crap so to me I'll call this a 4star ........

Good story. As usual, well written. Sorry that you're not posting more frequently. I liked that he finally divorced her. I didn't like that they had such poor communication skills. I also laughed when she used the excuse "get even" for her infidelity. Getting even rarely works out for either party. Well played.

She was out of control and decided that it was in her best interest to humiliate her husband to get payback (disproportionate) without even communicating to him about the circumstances of the affair. Then she kept screwing Burt weekend after weekend. The husband's response was entirely appropriate. At some point it went from payback to humiliation to her just getting her rocks off. Burt was wise to pull back. She would have never forgiven Tad even if they had "honored" the original agreement and would have used whatever rationalizations to keep cheating once she had her night in the Club. It was over then and she killed it. Definitely a person's with mental issues.

No, she will not have a stable relationship again. Her revenge was the product of a narcissistic rage she allowed to consume her and used to justify cruelty toward the man she claimed to love. In fact, the cruelty brought her pleasure and satisfaction. There are some levels of depravity from which the human mind and spirit cannot return. If we choose to become the thrall of Satan, we exclude ourselves from Jehovah's flock.

Typical little boy rants in the comments. When he cheated, he had zero moral high ground to object to anything she did. According to those same little boys, if she had been the one who cheated, she and her lover should be maimed or murdered. How is it that when it's the man who cheats, somehow, he deserves the slightest respect? She should move on and be happy the bastard is gone. And she should tell every potential partner he will ever have about his cheating.

THE CUCK WRITER DID A GOOD JOB.

This was not written by GA. There is way too much that does not fit into the wimpy, sorry ass, unable to communicate, non confrontational standard Mc this writer always produces. Why no cuckolding, ??? Just way to,far,out of the ordinary here, somebody else did the work and assumed the name.

She sowed, she reaped. Such is life. LP

You didn't discover that you're an exhibitionist, you came to realize you're an amoral cum dump. Nothing more. So let your jazz filled ass freak flag fly! Celebrate your whore status as you rack up those STDs till it eventually kills you.

It was interesting to read an attempt to turn a cartoonish initial tale into something with a bit of heart, soul, and reality. I’m not so sure that the cartoon ever left the stage, but this was a valiant effort by a genuine writer.

Too late, smart.

It but it should have been reconciliation story. But I get how much she humiliated him, it must have been really hard for him to watch.

Reconciliation was not possible after whe went nuclear. It is a sad story about revenge, disproportionate response, and irrational behavior without reviewing the facts or circumstances. Though as a quick aside, I do wonder why the husband couldn't tell her the pertinent information earlier, even in an email. But her betrayal that first weekend was done so fast and so irrationally, that there was no way for Tad to stop it without violence. I would point out that Burt is a total asshole to be part of the revenge so early after first discovery. I wish he would have learned the truth about the one time slip so he could feel like a piece of shit that he was to his best friend Tad. Of course this is a continuation so less room to maneuver. Worst of all is that she gets her revenge (in her mind) and yet because she doesn't get a fast enough response of coming back home after the first nuclear weekend, she runs off to Burt again. Fuck both her and Burt. That took a blowtorch to the already radioactive rubble of their marriage. Was nonsensical and Burt is doubly an asshole for going along with it. Burt comes out far better with his own family than he deserves. Not sure why the author decided to add the second weekend. Her not realizing what she was continuing to do, now just made her delusional and a real self-centered bitch. If you could have somehow believed what she did the first weekend was acceptable (good luck with that argument), what she did going to Burt's place the second weekend was surreal. It made her look like an irrational lunatic who somehow after a long time realizes she fucked up and is miserable. Yes too little too late but a lot of the dramatic tension was defused and dissipated when she went off that second weekend and their communications missed one another. Then it was just a descent into destruction while the wife blithely thought she did no wrong. Maybe similar ending, but toss out the second weekend and get them to communicate and the husband still gets a divorce, and she is still turned down by Burt. I don't see reconciliation even for just the first weekend but maybe it could have been tried and toyed with. But after the second? Hell no!

My problem with this entire series goes back to the very first story. We spend the entire first half of the story feeling sorry for the poor guy whose wife is deliberately embarrassing him, only to find that he had cheated on her first. Obviously, many (most?) of us feel that she went above and beyond "getting even," but again, our feelings are colored by the sympathy that we had built up for him.

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"I was waiting at our home for him to reclaim me." - A husband shouldn't have to "reclaim" his wife. They each made a lifetime claim on the other when they got married.

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It's only been ONE week, Tad is STILL furious, and she thinks it's a good idea to see Burt again?

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"I had to let him know that my spending the weekend with Burt wasn't part of his punishment," - She actually expects him to buy that?

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"then squashing him like a bug with the pictures, then leading Burt in triumph to our bedroom." - So, the public humiliation wasn't enough, she had to "squash him like a bug?"

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"This weekend wasn't part of the punishment" - If the weekend isn't part of the punishment, then it's flat-out cheating! If he had some lame-ass excuse for HIS cheating, would she have let it go?

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"That weekend, he mastered me." - More than Tad did in 12 years?

Hated the first 5 parts, this wasn't any better?

A reasonable ending to a rather sad story.Sandy finally realizes that her rationalizations blinded her to the realities of the situation and ultimately not only ended her marriage but her ill-conceived sexual relationship with Burt. Tad & Burt both ended up on their feet with wives & children while she ended up alone,realizing too late her part in it all. (This ending was much better than those presented by the original author.~ 5 ~

Crazy wife.