All Comments on 'Arrival at Tiln'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

The second chapter in this series is a superior fantasy read, as the main characters Arvan and Cassandra set out on their journeys. (The first chapter should be read first in order to properly understand this one). The story fully engages the reader, and there is a perfect balance between plot and love scenes, and the author weaves them together with consummate skill. Five stars for a fine new author.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Really didn’t like her being with other men after she belongs to him now.

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Just a simple erotic author who writes just about whatever pops into my head. Most of what I write I shred up and toss away but this is the first time I've decided to let the public read them. I want to become a better writer so please give me any tips, criticism, suggestions,...