All Comments on 'Ashley Becomes an Owned Slut'

Writing style is good. But somehow I cannot connect to the story. The characters are flat like robots. She is supposed to move to the ranch? What about her old live. Walk in get a collar be a slave...? Where does the motivation come from, how does it build up?

FYI 44DD implies a 44" underbust (ribcage) and 49" bust. So you have a woman who's waist is 8" less than her ribs, and her hips 4" less than her ribs.... Did you mean to do that?