All Comments on 'Ashley the First'

Sexy, sweet, and lots of fun. Great teasing buildup, wetfanatic.

Well written. More?

delightful and fun story. Very well told. thanks for sharing.

If only I’d had someone like that come along 50 years ago, when I was the geeky, virgin university freshman. 5 stars here, and hoping for Ch 2.

for me this is the kind of story I like a lot. i had experiences like this when I was a young man and I really enjoy this kind of story. the writing in perfect, story line is perfect, only thing missing is chapter two where the boy gets fucked. thanks I will be looking for more.

That was so hot! First time reading your work and I love it. Really need a part two.

Thanks so much! Yup, working on something new now, stay tuned!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!