All Comments on 'At Last A Weekend Alone Ch. 02'

by Dr Jerkyls Hyde

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
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They're conversation is terrible. Either they're real life counter parts are really dumb or you need to improve the erotic quotient of your characters' conversations. I much prefer the previous chapter which was quiet and atmospheric.

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