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I start to chuckle slightly as that one sentence grounds me.
'Well shit. With everything that'd been going on, I'd completely forgotten about my normal life.' I start.
'Understandably.' Kat chuckles.
'Oh... and Kat?' I begin.
'Yeah..?'
I open my mouth to speak only to find that my quivering lips halted my coming speech. This whole situation involving Kat and I didn't sit completely right with me but with what had happened earlier, I'd felt a sudden connection to her. The pieces had lined up nicely and I could feel like she wanted to trust me, as if even before all this power stealing business, she'd admired me. Could what was once a deep hatred between two people blossom into a trusting friendship? I didn't know, but I was willing to try. I gather some gusto in my chest and ask what I wanted to ask.
'You wouldn't mind giving me a lift to college tomorrow, would you..?'
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 months agoI’m really enjoying the story, keep going! The only feedback I have is that you keep switching between present tense (“she sees”) and past tense (“she saw”), sometimes in the same paragraph, which is quite distracting. You should pick one and stick to it for the entire story. There is basically no situation where mixing them is the right thing to do. Past tense is usually easier, but either works. Up to you.
