All Comments on 'Augur Ch. 04'

Fantastic story, the on issue i have is the chapter length. I need mooooooooore.

Good story. Just short chapters..

An excellent start; I look forward to seeing where this story goes.

As for the magic lessons, I'm curious whether innate (presumably?) knowledge of magic would make her a good or an awful teacher. We'll see, I suppose!

I do have some longer chapters coming up - I think 3 and 4 are the shortest so far.

I like it. Keep up the good work.

Enjoying this! Keep it up, I want to see more!

I call BS. She should be able to draw WAY more Sin than just Wrath and Lust from League of Legends...

If Cindy is feeding off the protagonist, then she should be sucking him dry, slowly weakening him. This is perfect for her because his death/her freedom is what she is impelled to pursue. In addition she is corrupting him spiritually, making him increasingly unable to resist her. At some point he'll be too weak to get out of bed and too weak to resist her. The only way he could save himself is to throw someone else at her to feed on.

I am really enjoying this series. looking forward to your next installment.

The league of legends idea was very amusing

You’re working on the “Best in Genre” award.