All Comments on 'Aunt Beth and Me Pt. 02'

Incest and trailer trash stories are not usually my cup of tea, but this one appealed to me on some level. It’s a great job of showing, not telling, especially the way we learn about Jimmi by his own words. While he seems too naive, given his background it actually makes sense.

One bit of constructive criticism: tighten up on the typography. In a couple of places, you continued a quote past the character’s words and into the description. It’s not a killer, but it’s annoying for some of us compulsive editors.

Keep up the good work.

Another great story from you, as usual.

Continue this story please. I sn really getting off on it.

As I said. Let Jimmi and Johnnie fuck a girl (s) occasionally. Even small cocks are useful. Then they can eat the girls. Or eat them first then fuck them. Give them a break.