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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

It seems the sex in this chapter was merely perfunctory, wham, bam descriptions. Not nearly as interesting as chapter 1. Quite dull actually. The May m should've tried to seduce Derek, because as you described him, he seemed like a weeny. Also, if mom's involved, you need to post it in the incest category.

SpecterNecterSpecterNecter9 months agoAuthor

Yeah you are probably right .. I appreciate the review. I wanted to upgrade this chapter but I kept coming up kinda blank.

1thaiguy1thaiguy8 months ago

Derek needs to learn that he blew it.

looking forward to more sex BTW it is ok to write more than 1 page lol

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Started out strong in ch1, but have lost their magic

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I prefer stories where the characters talk ...I'll sometimes read just between the quotation marks of an entire book.

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