All Comments on 'Back of the Bus, Pt. 02'

I want to be bred by a black man! I crave it❤️❤️❤️❤️

This story needs an editor. The pov switches from first-person narration by the husband in part 1 to third-person narration by the wife, and the husband never re-enters at all. Some of the physical action is improbable, like the guy BEHIND her putting her breasts in his mouth. The phrase "black semen" is ridiculous.

Only one Wendy?

great part 2 can't wait for more chapters

I love comments by anonymous critics. Thank you. Point taken about the pov between pt 1 and pt 2. As to the husband not re-entering at all, at this point he is still out of town, if you're speaking geographically. Regarding the "improbable" physical action... I'm not finding any reference in Pt 2 concerning the guy behind her, or any character in Pt 2 for that matter, putting her breasts in his mouth? Finally, what is your objection to the phrase "black semen"? I appreciate your feedback, thanks!

1 stat because put incest tag but this is just step son step mom stuff, dont false advertize!