Bad Girl Pt. 05

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Oh, no, she's pulling my ass cheeks apart. This can't be good. She pulls out! Yeah!

Vickie screams in excitement, "LOOK! LOOK! It's gaping! Hurry Jane!"

Oh, you guessed it, Vickie was holding me open, so Jane can shove the huge cock in me. Oooooo. That's definitely not the HUGE cock that I saw Vickie take. OK, I understand now. She brought three out. She took the biggest one. They started me with the smallest and then upgraded to the medium.

I said the worst part if being broken open. When already gaping, adding a slightly larger item doesn't hurt as much. Notice my wording, "as much." It still hurts. However, both mothers are going to town on my cock and I'm about ready to spray my load. I love these two so much. Once again, they show their intelligence and wisdom when it comes to me.

Surprisingly quick, I am shooting my load into a hand as I scream out my orgasm. I only get four weak spurts of cum. I am exhausted and want to roll over. However, If I did that, I would tip over the lounger and a mother would be underneath.

I yell out, "Uncuff me. NOW!"

In a flash, without hesitation, Jane and Vickie release one restraint on each side. I fall forward on the lounger as both moms get up off the ground."

Jane asks, "What did we do wrong?"

Sophia is angry and answers the question, "Let's start with, did Bill like what you just did?"

Vickie is frustrated, "Hey, I did ..."

Sophia interrupts her daughter, "Answer my question. Did Bill enjoy that?" Neither answer. "So why bother? Why would you do anything ever that he doesn't like? You can't go by what you like. We're all different. You don't force people to do things they don't like. If he offers, then fine. You were in a position of authority, and you abused it. That's why Connie and I are staying on, you two aren't ready yet.

"As to why ... He's exhausted. When he shot his cum, he wanted to fall over. That tips him and the chair on one of us. He anticipated a danger to us and cried out for help."

Mom adds, "I want him oiled again for the sun, and we let him sleep until dinner. I want one more thing after dinner, and then we are done with this event. Dress up for dinner, we have guests coming over. Now go."

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I am woken up two hours later by Jane, "Get up sleepyhead. Mom wants you showered, dressed, and down for dinner in thirty minutes. We're not allowed to help you."

I am still tired. I slowly walk to my room and start up a steamy shower that rejuvenates me. It's not thirty seconds before mom and Sophia join me.

I giggle, "What happened to 'We're not allowed to join you?' Hmmmm?"

Sophia runs a washcloth across my back, "That only applied to our daughters. We can't get you if they have you."

I chuckle, "Experience trumps youth every time."

Mom laughs, "Don't you forget that buster."

They dry me off and I get dressed.

To be continued ...

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FseriesFseries5 months ago

Yep. This tanked.

KahunabobKahunabob11 months ago

Stork. Bud. You fucking dropped the ball here. Pegging a guy that doesn't want to be pegged? Screw that. That's rape. Up until that point it was wild, but already going out of control. That entire re-visiting the NSA scene should never have been written. Aunt Libby should never have been allowed near him. She and to a lesser extent still Vicky are the worst of the bunch. I'm on my second read through and forgot you put this in here. If you allow Bill to have any sense of decency and selfrespect he has left in chapter 6, you'll have him walk away from the entire family for good. You've basically written the entire female cast as cockhungry sluts using Bill as their personal boy toy and sex slave in all but name. You can do better. You can write better. Be better.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I’m starting to enjoy how badly written this story is. Like a terrible comedy that’s so shit you can’t help but chuckle a bit… actually that reminded me, why does a us navy seal giggle like a schoolgirl, men chuckle,

NirosuNirosualmost 2 years ago

So I've got to ask why are so many of the supposed kink/sex club characters also completely incompetent when it comes to kink/sex? Like it seems like the less kinky a character is the more they know about kink, that seems sort of backwards??

Like every kink/sex club character doesn't understand sex, I truly wonder why you wrote it that way. This is just a part of the character inconsistencies that happen throughout.

Honestly having someone read a first draft to catch some of these inconsistencies so that plot points can be rewritten would probably be a good idea.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not sure you could have planned any worse scenaros to bore us at this point. This is simply retarded at this point. Kept hoping there was a reasonable opportunity for this story to be saved, apparently not. Vast majority of us could care less for this type of direction. Look what happened to Bruce Jenner..... totally stupid and waste of human and mankind with that lot.... and you are headed the same direction ............ yuck...... sick sick sick.........

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

I understand that Sandy, Libby, and Phoebe are invited to liven things up. But by the character's character, he's already made up his mind. He only has four girlfriends. He demands loyalty from them and pledges to be faithful to them. That was the pact in the hotel room. And now the pact is broken. This could have consequences.

At the end, Sandy and Libby suddenly disappear. The servants, despite Vicky's warning that Billy is off-limits to them, suck his dick.

The anal sex scene looks like rape at all.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 2 years ago

Not sure where this is headed - there's only so many sex scenes you can do with the same people, then "yawn". Move the plot along, that's what interests me at this point. 4*

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticover 2 years ago

What bothers me the most is the inconsistencies. The MC is supposed to be a tough guy, a guy with strong will and very often we see him as a pathetic weak guy that submits to women. I cannot understand how he didn't break with Vickie definitely when she supposedly broke him. I don't like what Sandy is doing. As the MC says, she is using him to improve her sex life at home and supposedly the MC doesn't do anything in that regard. I would like the MC to tell her to choose between him and her husband, that she can't have both. I hate those stories in which the females are shared and fuc*ed by anybody. My cup of tea is just the opposite: the females renouncing other males because they are only interested only in the guy they have fallen for.

It remains unexplained at the end of the previous chapter. It seemed that the mothers were going something evil to the MC and the two daughters the next week, but we begin this chapter that six months have passed but it seems that the mothers didn't do anything evil that week. It seems that the author wanted to deceive us and that bothered me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This ongoing story has been fantastic, hitting kinda close to home without the money, very touching to tears at times, excellent writing Can't wait for the continuation. Thank You

muskyboymuskyboyover 2 years ago

Should have quit while you were ahead. This one made almost no sense. I'll read the next (hopefully) last chapter in hopes a master like yourself can bring all to a coherent end. Vickie is still a slut.....

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