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by MelindaMaye

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The poor or spotty memory seems to free your character to do what and whom she wants.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I loved the take on perspective, very nicely crafted

PlaasJapiePlaasJapie11 months ago

Nice progression of a returning memory. Love it.

ronibarretronibarret4 months ago

"The poor or spotty memory seems to free your character to do what and whom she wants."

Exactly! Nicely done!!

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I'm 25 years old, black hair, brown eyes. I'm 5'3" and 103 pounds. My figure is slim and a bit boyish, though I have gotten slightly more curvy in my 20s. I'm married to my college boyfriend. With his encouragement, I've decided to try writing about some of my fantasies an...