All Comments on 'Bar Lady Strips'

by nzkiwi1962

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good premise, but a little choppy. Needs better editing and development.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Hard to follow bc English was so bad. Jumped from different points of view all throughout it.

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