All Comments on 'Barn and Beyond Ch. 09 FInal'

by 4mnowhere

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer4 months ago

Well, I don't know how the others who read this story will feel about this HEA ending, but I think this was the perfect way to finish. With the loose ends tied up, the bad guys put away and hope for the future, who needs anything more than that. Thanks.

Ih8biggotsIh8biggots4 months ago

Too good to adequately praise. If only all of the abused and lonely could experience such love. Better yet, that no one had to experience abuse.

Dpj49Dpj494 months ago

A beautiful love and loving story. One can’t help but smile. Magnificent writing, thank you.

canndcannd4 months ago

I liked this story. I liked that we didn't have so much time spent going over the horrors and that what we were told was enough to cheer gab on in his beat down of the bad guys. I would have liked to see more in the development of their relationship. Maybe more of the day to day as the bond grew. I felt like we didn't see gab break down the barriers in sky. That said it was a nice hea and i always like those! The strength in sky and the protective nature of gab came thru well.

Terence56Terence564 months ago

I loved reading this story.

4mnowhere4mnowhere4 months agoAuthor

Thanks for your great comments and encouragement, I have started on another project and it will be set outside USA and will incorporate all your suggestions

Vinner0071Vinner00714 months ago

Wow! What a great story! Excellent job!

AnotherSelfAnotherSelf4 months ago

I loved this story. Jusy wow. All of the emotions were totally felt by the reader. I hated to see the story end. Great job

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