All Comments on 'Bast Pt. 04'

You wrote "Fine. Have more Bast!" I mean, the cat looked at us and insisted that we wanted more. What else could we do?

Wait, so is Bast Jr one of Bast Sr's kittens, or does this "convincing women" thing just happen to any cat called Bast?

Fine. Now we need more Bast ! :)

Can confirm, the cat went missing so it can tell us that it would be a good idea for more Bast.

I'm just so pleased that you incorporated my suggestions.

Concerning how Bast's 'powers' works I wanted to leave it a bit ambiguous as to what precisely was happening.

I love this story

Something else that's really interesting is the narrator's persistent use of condoms. You almost never see that in this sort of story. Responsibility.

Also, a lot of writers would have had a Kayin/Efe scene by now.

More Bast please.

well done!

More chapters? please? The cat said so?

Truly good stuff. I really like how you put this together!

nice wrap up

Great story. Would like many mere!