All Comments on 'Baywatch Ch. 04 - The New Guy'

Another story ruined

Love it. Can't wait to see where this goes

This is great I like the fact that some are just getting their rocks off while others are still caring

What's the point of adding in another guy? What's the point of the competition? Either the other guy wins, and this story is over, or (most likely) the other guy loses, but we still have to "watch" all the girls fuck another guy.

Pretty bad ending to the story, nobody wants a fuck off, the jealousy was good and how he fucked the girls harder but us reading about another guy fuck the girls for a whole episode is really not interesting, even if Chris wins, i'm skipping the next part man, this was perfect so far, especially him getting to fuck Bonnie, worst part was hearing that the dude passed the tests and Chris having to compete for his spot, you could have come up with sth better, trying out new girls and seeing the girls be jealous that Chris gets to fuck new people or Chris getting a gf in real life or dating one of the girls would have been fun

Stick with me here guys. I know you don't like what I did with chapter 4, but I think you'll like what I have planned in chapter 5. It probably isn't what you're expecting me to do. Just keep reading and I think you'll even like this chapter more. Don't give up on this story just yet.

I'm philosophical, I guess. I really loved it all so far, especially Jenna's oral talent and personality. She's really sweet, and I also like Jessica a lot, because she's apparently in love with Chris, without trying to own him.

I particularly like that the girls are regularly fucking other guys, only off duty, but I really think they should be seen to be fucking each other pretty often, or all the time, too. Maybe Bonnie and Samantha or Claudia could be fucking each other when Chris came in once, and ask him to join in?

Maybe some extra-curricular drama would be good? Like having Bonnie "complain/brag" a bit about having to fuck several guys together at home? Some kind of "extra spice," anyway!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!