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All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Wish For Pt. 02'

by SubmissiveCeleste

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CybersleuthCybersleuthabout 2 years ago

You have learned these lessons well. Your knowledge of the lifestyle shows clearly in your writing and it rings with a sense of truth. There are, indeed, madmen out there. Be careful.

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graymangazergraymangazerabout 2 years ago

Although both parts are noncon, this one seems darker and a bit more serious and threatening. That's not a bad thing but makes me wonder where it might lead. At the moment there appears no hope for Celeste, although she seems to be okay with some aspects of her captivity, so it'll be interesting to see where this goes. Personally I'm torn between a happy ending and something a bit more evil and realistic, considering what's happened so far. But I guess we'll have to wait and see, and hopefully have some fun along the way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good, except for the Sir instead of Master.

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Retired educator, loves reading and writing. I like all kinds of fiction and fantasy. New to the erotica bdsm scene. Have fantasied about being a submissive for most of my adult life.