All Comments on 'Beach Trip'

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DunkirkDunkirk10 months ago

She should have stayed the night. Her 2 friends could have fucked her again and again.

loveloverlovelover10 months ago

Good flow, development. A bit overwritten. Bring us more stories,

Aussieperv23Aussieperv2310 months ago

I loved the pace and sensuality of this story. So erotic. Thank you.

olblueyesolblueyes5 months ago

enjoyed it, very erotic,,well written,,

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