by Naughtybecca
Very nice and exciting! episode again, with some fundamental deliberations at the end. Promising - and that for a series that has already fully proven itself to be awesome, really astounding.
Where the fuck were we going? This piece of the puzzle closes perfectly — suspense, unknown, drama — yet some phases detract and run on longer than necessary. Much of the piece, while creative is not captivating — travel to destination, meeting with father is informative but mundane, the sex with Charles et al while intensely erotic too long — dominates toward what end? Becca asks: “Where the fuck were we going?” Exactly and to your credit. Did not like this piece as much as others but maybe I am being set up for much more. Love the hanging suspense.
Nice chapter in finally getting to the main target in this series. Seeing how devious and perverted this Charles Hamilton is. Can't wait to see how the story develops.
Good chapter. I have had the same doubts as Becca about Ethan I can't wait to read how this evolves and find out what Becca does.
Great closure to the bronzefield saga and on with the mission! What a great way for her to get in good graces as well. Let's hope that is actually the case as she works out where she stands on this mission and with her core group. I miss Nat though as she is a great counterpart for Becca. They are a badass team. Thanks for another great chapter and well done on that cliff hanger! Can't wait to see where they land.
Makes you wonder, is Charles the good guy or is Ethan? Lexa may be compromised and in the dark. Interesting twist