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All Comments on 'Becky and Bree - Ch. 00 - The Discovery'

by TheCarnalChronicler

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MrDawnFlufflesMrDawnFluffles11 months ago

Love it! Can't wait for more <3

FloatingdadFloatingdad11 months ago

Three stars for a good start to your story line. No criticisms or complaints. I like the intro without a sudden graphic encounter. Makes it more real. Kudos on a good first effort!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

So far, so good. Look forward to the next part.

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