All Comments on 'Becky: What Comes Next Ch. 02'

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AmbulAmbul8 months ago

“Everything that Charlotte had put her through, no matter how awful, somehow Becky had come to believe was in some twisted fashion, for her own good. It was awakening her to things she had never conceived of doing, never thought herself capable of.” But Peter was different and “there was no hope now. She was on her way to being used by a party full of her neighbors in every way possible.”

Becky knows that she craves being forcefully, and even forcibly fucked by big cocks. Much as she loves Bills, he cannot provide her with the sexual satisfaction and fucking that she now needs. She is on the verge of being publicly humiliated and fucked by many men, and Bill will be in attendance. What will happen next ?

cradulichcradulich8 months ago

Great story. one of the best I've read in awhile

AnnalovesitAnnalovesit8 months ago

Loved the opening toilet scene,so much more room in a disabled booth.

Then you tease us about the party, naughty.

Can't wait.

Anna

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Where do you find charlotte’s story

AmbulAmbul7 months ago

I love the leather outfit that Peter is making Becky wear to the Newell’s “notorious” block party. She will, no doubt, be the hit entertainment of the party. Maybe she won’t be recognized with the hood, and perhaps she will. In any event, she will be humiliated beyond belief and no doubt fucked over and over in all her holes, and orgasm almost continuously. She will hate what is happening, but again love how all the fucking pleasures her body. I love how the author is torturing petite, hot, and now seemingly always horny, Becky.

AmbulAmbul7 months ago

I hope that Charlotte’s story meshes well with Becky’s story. At some point I would love to see the two sluts, one self-assured and comfortable as a slut, and the other more doubtful and ashamed, come together is a fuckfest that could include Charlotte’s son Peter, Becky’s son Tom, and Freddy. There are so many hints in Becky’s story about Charlotte’s uninhibited fucking around that her activities need to be brought into the story.

PappasleazePappasleaze7 months ago

Yeah , I am not a fan of Peter. I don't think the character really adds to the actual story line he is there just to show some kids hate their mother. I would rather see charlotte continue to use and abuse, come up with the senerials for Becky as they read so much better and usually are erotic. where as Peter's read is a nast rapist. Hopefully we will find out in the long run that Bill was in on it all with charlotte so the two of them could be togther and have Becky as their pet slut.

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