All Comments on 'Becoming His Ch. 11'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Please don’t stop

I’m mesmerized by this series. Please keep writing!

mrdomdavis over 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks!

I'm glad you like it so far! There are 3 more coming as they're approved and then I'm getting close on the next batch. Not sure if I'll just keep adding chapters or if I'll start a new one.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Why?

I know that a lot of people love TPE but now he’s fucking with her job. She’s supposed to go round smelling if piss at work and out in public?? WTF is erotic about that even in a fantasy?

I was enjoying the story but not sure if I can carry on reading this.

Tess (UK)

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