All Comments on 'Becoming His Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love it! From the normal day-to-day life of the mysterious Julian, to Damian realizing he has control and taking charge, and then to full submission again... Fantastic!

Perhaps this story could have taken the time to show us Damian's other two orgasms, but it was also a nice transition from the living room to the bedroom. Just a suggestion if you're looking for ways to add length and detail to future stories.

Can't wait to see how Damian saves Julian from their terrible date!

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