All Comments on 'Becoming Patty's Property Ch. 01'

nice dev. so far, but i have a request, try to make the girl kinda more attractive, like start working out or something... just my fantasy i guess.... :)

pretty good.. i like the development.. i would like to see what happens next

Good Start i really liked it keep em coming

I'm looking forward to reading this as it progresses (hopefully soon). I disagree with the first poster about making her more attractive. It's more humiliating for him that she's unattractive.

i thought it sucked. these people who liked it have to be kidding...

Have her fuck his ass with a strap-on! :)

Nothing new give me break . . .

I'd give fucking anything for this.