All Comments on 'Bed and Breakfast'

First story! The paragraphs are long and no dialogue.

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A suggestion for you. Find some stories here that you like or dislike. Either way, identify why you reacted to the story. What is it that pulled you into the story? Or the reverse, why didn't you like the story? Use those understandings to help you build your next story here. Good luck.

Ignore the haters. I understood exactly what transpired. Hope there is another part

Enjoyed very much. Thanks