All Comments on 'Bedburn Beck'

by ArabethMora

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clearcreekclearcreekabout 2 years ago

You have a fun way of throwing a curve ball ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Saw it coming but it still a fun read! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

That was cute but highly visible from a great distance.

tennesseeredtennesseeredabout 2 years ago

Well plotted but the second person POV was a distraction. Carry on.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 years ago

Good story but 2nd person POV lowered it!

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I love to write erotica rather than graphic details. The situation is everything to me and as a wise man once told me, there are only so many ways of inserting tab A into slot B If you're looking for a money shot, its probably better that you read something else