by tlvanitycard
I love this content so much. Found this yesterday and binged through it all! Bee wonderful stuff!
FINALLY! You and your brother finally did the deed! The way that you were drawing it out was killing me!
First off, you're clearly doing a cut-n-paste from another blog. IMHO, I think that at the very least you should be doing an edit on the Preface in order to customize this for the Literotica format. It's quite distracting because you refer to ghost comments not presented on THIS forum.
Secondly, I can relate to the "initial penetration" thing from experience. I have had several girlfriends in the past that have commented on it. Those who were of the opinion that the initial penetration was their favorite part of making love to me were also unanimous in the opinion that the only other thing that came close was the sense of personal satisfaction that they achieved from feeling me releasing my swimmers deep inside of them. 5/5
Great Story!!! Might have been a little too long in places, but overall it was magnificent.
What a sexy, sexy story. This is the first story that I've read here on this site, it's probably spoilt me for the rest. More please. Loved it.