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by aykup32

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MigbirdMigbird9 months ago

Erotically amusing piece. Liked the anonymity; loved/felt the closing paragraph, especially the string — replete, completed and desired. Nice how well you transcribe your vivid imagination.

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The erotic should be poetic and fantasy shouldn't be unrealistic. Say more with fewer words.