by NaughtyJo73
Great to see you back at the keyboard. Love the start of this story amd dying to see just what fetishes Millie has in mind.
You'd better not be long with thr next parts...
Great Start, Can't wait to hear more...wish I could have this scenario with my two lucious next πͺ docs
Good premise.
Well structured. Well told.
Wasn't happy with the ending.
Ass fuck was harsh, not erotic.
Would have been better if she teased him with the idea of him fucking her ass. Then toying with it. Then lubricating it long before he 'jammed' his cock into her to make it easier and more enjoyable for both of them. The details of that enjoyment could/would have been juicy.
Ending aside, five stars.