All Comments on 'Behind Closed Doors Pt. 01'

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diusfidusdiusfidus4 months ago

Great to see you back at the keyboard. Love the start of this story amd dying to see just what fetishes Millie has in mind.

You'd better not be long with thr next parts...

KinkyAlGreenKinkyAlGreen4 months ago

Love this start, hope it gets really dirty!

15091962150919624 months ago

Like were this is heading, hope there's more to come.

CasyWoodsCasyWoods4 months ago

Great Start, Can't wait to hear more...wish I could have this scenario with my two lucious next πŸšͺ docs

MaydaypilotMaydaypilot4 months ago

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good premise.

Well structured. Well told.

Wasn't happy with the ending.

Ass fuck was harsh, not erotic.

Would have been better if she teased him with the idea of him fucking her ass. Then toying with it. Then lubricating it long before he 'jammed' his cock into her to make it easier and more enjoyable for both of them. The details of that enjoyment could/would have been juicy.

Ending aside, five stars.

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I have some kinks, externally and internally Many stories are written from or inspired by real life Even in completely fictional stories the characters are real people I know. Often changes to what happened are updating to the modern world, so a smart phone in a story might ...

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