All Comments on 'Best Friends with Benefits Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Poorly written. Was Mary bothering you while you were writing? Pausing at a red light and having an angry driver behind you. You could have shared with him.

PolpolpPolpolp8 months ago

What a poor story , with the weakest plot as you belittled the husband, just stop writing

LenardSpencerLenardSpencer8 months ago

Two cheating sluts. Nothing erotic about that.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Where's the beef.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Did Mary lose a kid somewhere along the line-you mentioned she had 3 kids in part 1.......

Not bad but only average followup story, keep writing though. thx for your effort.

26thNC26thNC8 months ago

That was a sad, silly attempt at a story. The LW tag is a joke.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

BoredLover, BoredWriter or ... BoredReader ?

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