by BoredLover
Poorly written. Was Mary bothering you while you were writing? Pausing at a red light and having an angry driver behind you. You could have shared with him.
What a poor story , with the weakest plot as you belittled the husband, just stop writing
Did Mary lose a kid somewhere along the line-you mentioned she had 3 kids in part 1.......
Not bad but only average followup story, keep writing though. thx for your effort.