All Comments on 'Best Present Ever'

Very hot! Sexy story, no humiliation, lots of husband/wife love throughout it. Thank you for sharing it!

10 Big Blazing Stars to JB for a story very well done! Hot Hot Hot Birthday present! I agree with Lusty Scribe, Hot story, NO HUMILIATION, lots of love between husband and wife. I have actually done this very story so many times as this describes one of my strongest fantasies. Very well told, almost got wood. LOL Thank You so Much. Buster2U

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I'm thinking these people don't really want to be married. Talk about a horrible gift.

Oh yeah, I loved the story description but felt itneeded more truth in advertising. "I give my wife an incredible birthday gift.' An STD infected stud named Leonard. If only we had thought this evening through a little more!"

An idiot husband opening the door to divorce.

Wimp.

He was wearing a rubber but you say that his sperm was dripping from her pussy. You forgot to mention if she decided to pull the rubber off him.

Responding to the last post about removing the condom: it’s in the story. You just missed it. She “tossed it over her head.”

Can’t these anonymous critics fucking read?

Wow that was a great hot well written quick read, thanks. I’m sure you know to ignore the trolls that are so illiterate that they don’t even know that you explained the condom and the std screen!

Hot fun story but he’s a young guy a few houses away and has a taste of fucking the older. Hot married white woman.. He’ll never stop trying and she will cave . All my good friends that were black loved dominating white girls sexually. The older married ones even more , that all young guys get off on it more as it’s taboo of it makes it hotter. One great time my friend black kid fucked another friends aunt who was just a little older . He did it right in the room with everyone. Threee loads in ass pussy and third all over her pretty white face as he cock slapping the cum all over.. the nephew was pissed and called her every name under the sun saying he couldn’t ever look at her the same way again. The kid who fucked said take it easy she had a few fantasy complete today. Now let me finish the night making her my black cock slut laughing. Left door open all night so all could see and hear. He was yelling that’s it make out with that black asdhole if you want that pussy fucked more.. next day he was laughing saying he gets all the girls really dirty and freaky

This MC is one of the dumbest yet. His present for the wife is just going to be the “gift that keeps on giving” for him. Wife enjoyed herself way too much and will mistake his one time gift as a permanent hall pass. And Leonard will not be the last. Enough material here for a good sequel.

What’s wrong with cake and ice cream with a night at the opera and a pro makeover ? Seems like some nice gifts to make a 40 year old wife feel younger, plus you’d stand a lot better chance of still gifting her, as her husband, on her 41st birthday and beyond. Just saying …

Yeah, fatal error. Blue screen of death. You lost looser.

I read these stories for enjoyment. Well done.

5 stars