All Comments on 'Beth Seduces Daddy Ch. 07'

Big mistake.

BIG.

Loved the first 5 chapters, but this is just tedious. We’ve already read all the dialogue scenes and there’s nothing he does (other than the superfluous shrink) that we didn’t infer from the original text.

Post an announcement at the beginning of the next chapter that includes something NEW.

Rapierwit24601, I'm sorry that my story made you so angry. Chapter 8 will finish the overlap and start presenting new scenes.

Fran V

How did you infer “anger”? Just giving critical input.

Some writers here simply write for their own amusement, while others try to improve themselves as writers and invite criticism. Forgive me if I mistakenly assumed you were one of the latter.