All Comments on 'Betsy’s Exposure Pt. 03'

Like the story but the plethora of typos is super distracting.

MonsieurX

Thanks for the comment.

Please explain your comment to the story Betsy's exposure, as I can see you do an abundance of writing on this site!

I would like to see an example of your prose so I can become a better writer.

I’m traveling at the moment, but when I get home in a few days I’ll send you a private message with more detailed feedback. Bottom line is I enjoy your stories, and think your writing style is good, but you have enough errors (capitalization, comma use, possessives, sentence fragments,etc) that I find myself distracted by them, diluting my enjoyment. While I have never written fiction, I do have academic publications, and absolutely believe in the utility of good editing. I’m convinced your work would benefit greatly from better editing, and I’ll send you a few examples of what I mean.

I've sent you private feedback. I hope you got it!