All Comments on 'Betsy’s Exposure Pt. 06'

sorry but you will only get 5 stars for this chapter I was going to give you more but It doesn't allow me. Great chapter. can't hardly wait for the next one. Pappasleaze!

Your writing could be enjoyable, but there are just too many errors. Every error makes your readers stop to check what you mean, and the flow is lost. If you can’t find an editor, at least use Word or Google Docs combined with Grammarly to get most of the errors. Please don’t dismiss the importance of getting the words and grammar right » they are what makes your fun story into something fun to read.

To Anonymous,

Maybe you have to stop to look up the some of the words I am using to replace words that I have used too much and that is distracting from the prose.

I have re-read this story and found no errors.

Please send a list of my errors so I know what your talking about!