by CotswoldLover
Liked the build up and detailed erotic conclusion. Used to do that sort of thing out in the countryside myself, but never got caught in the act!
Sweet tale
Of course bad-boy Boris would be outraged.
Be fun if you could draw out the tension a bit longer, maybe give the reader a better sense of the cyclist (have the age okay, but some sense of his features and more hints of his mindset would be welcome.) But a promising authorial start.
'So why were you standing in a field with your cycling shorts pulled down having a wank?'
Always a good idea to ask these sorts of questions.
Really appreciate the politeness and directness of the characters. There are so many ways stroking with others can feel awkward or taboo I find. This is amazing!
Strangely enough I was in Broadway last Saturday visiting a friend.It always reminds me of when my husband and I were in Chipping Campden for a wedding and I ended up being fucked by 5 locals over a bench in a pub garden.He had crashed out,drunk,and the men seemed obsessed with my large tits,so I allowed them to undress me down to my black stockings.The most senior of them took my knickers off and bent me over the bench.Then 5 of them proceeded to take turns fucking me for about 2 hours.It was wonderfully erotic,a summer’s night being utterly used by these men.When they had satisfied themselves with my body they took a few selfies with their hands all over my tits!My husband was oblivious to it all,but I have since confessed to him what they did to me,love,Caroline
Good story. You should write more I love stories about proper British women letting themselves get wild.