All Comments on 'Black Alpha's Day Pt. 02'

by stafbeck

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Feedback??

Okay, this was nothing but horrible, if you think you're gonna gain an audience submitting shit like this you're out of your fuckin mind. Alpha, Beta, what, are you a fuckin primate? Alpha and beta don't exist in the human race. The premise of the story borders on insanity, put this shit in sci-fi where the unrealistic world thrives. I didn't need to read past the first paragraph to know it was a loser.

PhoenixpapaPhoenixpapaover 3 years ago
Damn good job

As an experienced Black Bull, I applaud you for your writing. Absolutely continue this series and have him breed every flavor of women out there. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Dead meat?

Someone take a baseball bat to Demarcus and dump him in his BMW in the river.

newmantopleasenewmantopleaseover 3 years ago

More big asses. That’s all lol

1812raskolnikov1812raskolnikovover 3 years ago
New idea

I liked it a lot, but considering how powerful Demarcus is I think it would be fun to have a chapter with a woman/women who are more resistant to him, but eventually break when their bodies betray themselves. Something where Demarcus has to work a bit harder, y'know? Again, it's still great, I just think this could be a way to build on the world you have.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
this was so bad....

soooo bad

King40King40over 3 years ago
Keep on writing

Hot story about this black stud breeding every single white hottie around.

Next part could involve policewomen coming after being alerted by angry white dudes from the party.

They come to stop Demarcus but shortly find a big problem to solve..

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Glad the series is back and hope there is more. I would love to hear about maybe he breeds a mexican mother and her four daughters. Or maybe a mormon family, or an arab woman and her daughter. All would be hot. Keep it up

Bardot1990Bardot1990over 3 years ago
Black ALPHA?

Is this a story about an Alpha crashing a Kappa party? Or did you just use that context in the title and leave the obvious contention unresolved?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good Job.

The woman going wild over an Asian baby milkshake was great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Fantastic story man!!!

It was well worth waiting the 8 months

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Oh yes

It is good.

I did like to read of the white girls desperately scooping up the Black man's sperms and putting it in their cunts.

Also the white Bois all watching and wanking their small penises.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Best Story I've ever read

Easy 5 stars for this story. Maybe Demarcus travels to Japan and cucks a husband's family, and has a foursome with the wife and her two daughters.

The wife can force her husband to be a fluffer or to swallow his cum to humiliate him.

More ballbusting scenes would be great too!

Whatever you write is going to be great! I've already jerked to these two stories more than I can count!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I can't wait for part 3! This is the best cuckold story I've ever read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great Story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love this series. I'd like to see Demarcus force his harem sluts to dress up as maids and service his cock all day. While he sleeps, when he wakes up, as he eats breakfast, while he's driving around etc...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Would love to read Demarcus singlehandedly fuck a whole sorority of girls. Or a bunch of super models. Amazing writing btw!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can't stop jerking off to this series! We need more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excited for your part 3!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing story! Maybe for the next story Demcarcus can fuck a whole harem of college cheerleaders in the locker room.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You should write a story like Terasu MC's

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Waiting for part 3 to come out

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love your series! I check here everyday waiting for your next story to come out

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can't wait for you to write another story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is so good, more orgy's and cuckolding with Demarcus please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The beginning of your stories are written so well. Really does a great job developing the setting and tone of the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

When's part 3 coming out? It's almost been a year

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story dude

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nigger fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

My fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Lol did you base Aika after the JAV star?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Aika is def based after the JAV star lmao Stafbeck has good taste

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Patiently waiting for your next post

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Thank you! great time reading the story, I LOVE BBC as well as my girlfriend.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I want Demarcus to take a trip to China and fuck all the women there

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Where's part 3?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Something this gross and dehumanizing has to have come from the world’s most masochistic nazi.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Waiting patiently for part 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I was with my girlfriend at a night club when she accidently bumped into a large black man making him spill his drink on the front of his pants. He turned and punched my face, then grabbed my girl and they disapeared. I later found my girlfriend bouncing her pussy up and down his massive cock on the backseat of my BMW SUV!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please don't listen to the haters, this is the best BNWO story i've ever read! Thank you thank you thank you for putting my fantasies into words! Also i'm jacking off like a madman reading this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lol I still come back to reread this series. It's that good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Still waiting for part 3!

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