by Robarreto
How old was the person who wrote this? Most middle schoolers have better command of english then he does. It's so bad that it wasn't even reasonably enjoyable to read.
Yes, the English is terrible, but I'm guessing is a new second language. However, I liked the story line. Simple, concise and everyone is having fun, except for that baby thing! I'm hoping he does write about her adventures with Dwan's friends.