by NoWriterI
As before your new Chapter really brings the Story of Anna and Eddie to life. I can't wait to see how it will go on, and to Eddies or rather Eydies trip to Vegas.
Thanks for your great Work
This chapter is very good even if it doesn't have many sex scenes but I like how it built up. I hope if we don't wait alot before a new one coming up
Into some hot 18 year old? Why not just use some innocent and already hot 18 year old? Have you SEEN old porn stars? They look used up! And if Eydie is being feminized and falling in love with a man, then he’s not going to be in live with Anna and how the fuck do you think this will affect their children?
Seriously. You are so fucked up that if you think this is erotic then I pity what you must be doing to your children.
I think it is so hot that she is a wife and mother. And her husband is transformed as well. Keep it going.
I was thinking WT(H)!!! H cup breasts! Really H cup. But after looking at models that I think are built similar to Anna maybe this could work. I will be interested to see how this works in the next chapters. And also you are doing a good job of making readers become emotionally invested in your stories if they are making comments about the children. I hope we I start my series I can cause that same amount of interest.