All Comments on 'Blackmailed - Jenna's Money Pt. 03'

These successive chapters get progressively worse. This story is dead unless a dramatic change is made, like her husband finds out.

When is martin going to get done.

2.03 score, pretty much sums up this story.

So, basically, part after part of her being a gutter slut, with no real direction, reasoning, or coherency.

Just going to keep beating a long dead horse?

Is there a point to it?

None of this any good, you just seem to enjoy writing about a worthless skank and doing so badly.

Not sure but I figured if you can write (I use that in the broadest of terms) you could read, and if you can read you'd know you either need to stop or improve.