by BoundtopleaseU
The series started out ok, but each chapter gets dumber and dumber. More is just more, not necessarily better, as the ratings reflect.
I really liked how the story started but then again ı’m not really a fan of the swapping mates.I think it should be a special thing between lynn and andy. Hope you fix it in the future keep writing my friend.
Hi Anonymous, i agree with both of you on the swapping part, but there is only so much you can do between 2 people. I only added the swapping with Gordon and the party for variety. You are the second person to say to stop it. I will do what I can with chapter 11, I think chapter 12 will be the end of the series as I can only do so much with just 2, or even 4 people. Chapter 10 has already been posted, but chapter 11 I will work on a huge cut back and chapter 12 will close out the series, I think. Thank you so much for your input, I greatly appreciate the positive and constructive way of commenting on the storyline.
Thanks again
Hi,
I am a big fan of your work.
Any chance that a Slime Girl can make an appearance?
Thanks!
Hi anonymous, I’ll see what I can do about a slime girl. I had an idea about chapter 11, I had writers block, I have the ideas in my head , just having a tough time finding the time to write.
BoundtopleaseU
Thanks so much for your consideration.
Hopefully, you’ll overcome the writer’s block soon.