All Comments on 'Blondie in Jamaica'

I know it's fiction but have you ever actually had sex in the ocean? Water is not a great lubricant, in fact it's quite the opposite. Yes you can enjoy vaginal sex at least for a short time but anal? No thanks.

A remberance of her vacation will be the baby bump her black lover sent her home with.

For the next chapter, Let's have Blondie going home with a black bun in the oven. Dagwood will learn to watch wearing his cock cage and ball gag. Then do a nice clean up.

You don't appear to know how to use the tags feature, but at least you put a warning up top about anal, so those of us not wanting to read about closeted men that prefer a dirty, gender-neutral asshole to a pussy could avoid the rest. Any sort of sex in the ocean, or a chlorinated pool, or a hot tub, is a real problem unless the guy has a micropenis and the woman's insides are made out of leather. At a minimum, bring a lot of silicone-based lube that won't dissolve or be rinsed away in water.

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