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Click hereI spent one more moment enjoying the scene. My daughters were precious, and my boy cute. No real surprise there, given how exquisitely gorgeous all their mothers were. More importantly, they were all intelligent, quick, and relatively good kids. I say relatively, because all kids went on a tear at times.
I moved down the hallway, and into the bedroom, where two naked goddesses were already in bed. Regina was on her knees behind Alexa, who was on her hands and knees. My busty light blonde wore a thin strap-on and she was working it into Alexa's tight pear shaped and forever perfect ass.
Regina smirked over her shoulder playfully, and said, "Greg, I think I'm making Alexa's pussy jealous, will you see to that? Make sure your nice and wet first, so use her naughty mouth for that."
Alexa whimpered and panted in excitement, at the idea of taking my fat cock at the same time Regina was taking her ass. It wasn't something we did often, but Alexa did like a rough split roast warmup and DP sometimes and she always came non-stop like a freight train when Regina set one up.
What's a blood servant to do?
I attended to my duties of course, as was only right.
Life was awesome.
Plot good, characters interesting, prose well constructed and not balky.
At least two thirds of the overly repetitive sex scenes could have been removed, leaving a less boring and more enjoyable reading experience.
Excellent. As your stuff usually is. Not too hard for me to speed through the excess sex, I’m sure some like it. Lots of options left with this storyline. Thanks!
Too much sex. It got repetitive. Every time I saw ten inch dick, cock, or bat or saw how unselfishly he fucked his double D goddess with it, I rolled my eyes. Man with ten inch bat satisfies three vampire goddesses. Seriously? Otaaaaay - it is your story. I did like the plot, though - and you write well - but the immature size crap got old.
As others have said, this is quite disappointing. Don't tell me they were awed or amazed or shocked or felt love, show it through actions. The sex felt like it was written out of obligation.
So, as tired as I am of vampire and lycanthrope stories, major bonus points for not having any 'soul mate,' 'alpha omega,' or 'fated lover' bullshniz. Even more bonus points for a harem story well done.
I liked the story. Didnt like the smut, unfortunately. The non stop praising for the vampires GODDESSES is understandable but offputting.
Would have rather fucked and bred the Italians, kaori and her daughter instead too.
I made it through because I like to finish what I start and I didn't want to speak unfairly. Now that I've read it all, there wasn't nearly as much story as I'd hoped, just overly sappy sex that was far too detached from reality to enjoy or identify with. Sure, it's a sex-story sight but I want more than that - and you're a damn good writer and capable of providing that.
I really enjoyed this story series, first to last instalments. Thank you for sharing it with us here.
I followed you because of two good stories you wrote. Dahlia Brith of an A.I. and Ted Online. I like where you started with this story. If you're intentions for this were a sex romp with some story to hold it together then congratulations. Originally I came to this site for the sex stories. I stayed for the adventures that authors like you are willing to write in stories such as Dahlia and Ted Online. Albeit the sex parts were great but I was more Interested in the world's you built. It is stories like that, that I would like to find more of to read. This could have been one of the great ones if you had more world building and relationship development. If a sex romp was your goal then you accomplished what you set out to do. If not. Then I give it 2 stars.