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Anonymousover 1 year agoYou're doing a good job. You're at the point where the story is getting more important than the sex, and can lower the number of sex scenes or their length. Your world building is good so far, keep going!
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MiddleAgedMan@MiddleAgedManUpdate, January '24 I am very sorry for the long wait, life has been turbulent the past six months, with very little time to spare. In addition, I have hit kind of a road block in my story, and I'm struggling to get the story to evolve the way I want it. I appreciate the feed...
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